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The birds chirped in unison
Creating divine music
The fish swam in the water
The very epitome of unity
The ducks paddled away in groups
Defining beauty itself
A pair of eagles swooped overhead
Gliding with ease and grace
The soothing winds blew
And the trees swayed in symphony
The flowers fell down in a shower
To form a carpet of softness and colour
Each of them was a thing of beauty
But the crystal clear water
Mirroring them all in one canvas
Was the most breathtaking sight
Good one :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Anu ! Celebrating your first imprint in this space :)
DeleteThanks Anu ! Celebrating your first imprint in this space :)
DeleteI liked the poem, Aarthy! My poems used to be or even now are ones with rhyming words and yes when I read them after a while I feel quite foolish. Nevertheless, they are what came to my mind at that point and that's OK too :-D
ReplyDeleteNothing wrong with rhyming words Uma! That is quite an art too. I have read your poetry and they are mature and poignant. I was talking about my kiddy poems where I rhymed cat and mat just for the heck of it :)
DeleteThanks for liking the poem Uma. I need quite a bit of encouragement in this department :)
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